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Iron Man, Iron Man, does whatever an iron can

May 22nd, 2008, 8:26 am by fsherman

(If you’re too young to know what that title line refers to, never mind).

I really liked the Iron Man movie. And having some leftover money on my birthday gift certificate, I decided to pick up Marvel’s trade paperback collection of Iron Man’s early adventures.

While at times the series is very good, I don’t think it’s anywhere near the level of Stan Lee’s best work from the Silver Age. The problem is, I think, that unlike FANTASTIC FOUR, SPIDER-MAN, THOR or XMEN, the cast is very small: Besides Tony, the only regulars at this point (about halfway through the volume) are Pepper and Happy Hogan, which limits how much interaction the story can develop (and their interactions aren’t much—all Pepper and Happy do is banter like leftovers from a second-string romantic comedy). Plus, there’s no romantic element—Tony dates a lot, but there’s none of the melodrama that comes with Sue choosing between Reed and the Sub-Mariner or Peter Parker’s endlessly angst-ridden love life. And that’s not a compliment, more melodrama would have been an improvement.

The emotional aspect of the series rides entirely on Tony Stark’s damaged heart and his frequent need to rush and recharge it, and that’s not enough (and while the early issues pointed out what a problem this was in his personal life, even that angle’s faded as the series goes). Though in fairness, that may be partly because reality has gone so far past the formerly amazing SF concept of an electronic chestplate that can keep a heart beating.

I don’t know if Stan just stumbled, or if it’s that Don Heck, as the primary artist, didn’t contribute to the plotting as well as Ditko and Kirby did, but this is definitely the second string.

“All I want to do is make love to you”

April 25th, 2008, 9:27 am by fsherman

Anyone remember this Heart song from the late 80s/early 90s? A woman picks up a stranger, has one magical night of love, then leaves? Then he finds out later she seduced him because her husband is sterile and she wanted a child.
I was listening to it on the radio just now and I think it’s the first time I’ve heard her parting words clearly:
“I am the flower
You are the seed
We walked in a garden
And planted a tree.”

I realize it’s metaphorical, but that makes no sense whatsoever.

William Lloyd Garrison speaks!

April 16th, 2008, 12:39 pm by fsherman

I thought of this quote from the 19th-century abolitionist as I was finishing Saturday’s column. It’s a great inspiration for any sort of political writing.

“I will be as harsh as truth, and as uncompromising as justice. On this subject, I do not wish to think, or speak, or write, with moderation. No! no! Tell a man whose house is on fire, to give a moderate alarm; tell him to moderately rescue his wife from the hand of the ravisher; tell the mother to gradually extricate her babe from the fire into which it has fallen; — but urge me not to use moderation in a cause like the present. I am in earnest—I will not equivocate— I will not excuse —I will not retreat a single inch — AND I WILL BE HEARD.
With reasonable men, I will reason; with humane men I will plead; but to tyrants I will give no quarter, nor waste arguments where they will certainly be lost.”

Li’l Abner

March 18th, 2008, 11:52 am by fsherman

I don’t know if anyone reading this remembers Al Capp’s old strip, about a hillbilly family in the backwoods wilderness of Dogpatch, but I do, and I’ve been reading reprints on comics.com for a couple of years now.
The reprints have been from the fifties, then last week they switched back to the start of the strip. While Capp’s writing style is still recognizable, the differences are startling.
The later strips are cartoonish in style; the earlier work is much more realistic. And the characters and situations are a lot less outrageous—the opening plot (Li’l Abner goes to stay with a wealthy relative in the big city) so far resembles a lot of City Slicker Meets Country Bumpkin stories I know of.
Nothing significant, but it’s interesting to see how the strip changed (and improved—Capp was a lot funnier as he went more over the top).

Style

January 15th, 2008, 12:30 pm by fsherman

A review of Elmore Leonard’s “10 Rules of Writing” says the following: “Good writing is not about the writer (and the way he sounds or the size of her vocabulary), but about the story. The writer must remain invisible.” I’m not sure if the “invisible” part is a quote from Leonard or a statement by the review, but either way, bunk.

This is a viewpoint I run into a lot in how-to-write articles and books: (which I still read, though less than I used to): To be good, writing must be simple and plain, devoid of any words or phrasing that make the reader conscious that a writer is involved. Just pure story, straight into the brain.

I don’t consider this to be a rule of good writing, it’s simply a stylistic choice. Even before I started writing (which makes me much more aware of other writers’ technique), I liked writers who could play with words: Raymond Chandler’s elegant yet hardboiled prose; Lord Dunsany’s poetic short stories (”The Gibbelins eat, as is well known, nothing less good than man.”); P.G. Wodehouse’s goofy, giddy fiction; or H.P. Lovecraft’s horror fiction, wildly overwritten by normal standards, but HPL made work.

I’m not that sort of stylist myself, but I enjoy many such writers who are. So to Mr. Leonard or the reviewer, I’d say, keep your hands off those who like to play with words.

Little things make a big difference

January 11th, 2008, 6:16 am by fsherman

After two weeks with a dead laptop battery, I received my replacement yesterday.

Knowing I can sit for four hours in Starbucks or Barnes & Noble and write without worrying about a plug is a great feeling. Well worth the $135 it cost.

Strange way to do an interview

December 10th, 2007, 2:50 pm by fsherman

My voice is currently sliding into laryngitis, so I just conducted an interview writing all the questions on my laptop and having the interviewees read the questions off. I think they found this a little weird. :)

Another short story out

December 5th, 2007, 3:41 pm by fsherman

My short story “Others Must Fail” is now available for free download from the online magazine Semaphore.

The writer’s strike

November 6th, 2007, 11:35 am by fsherman

http://kfmonkey.blogspot.com/ has an excellent breakdown of why they’re striking (the newest post just now, scroll down if it’s not).

While I’ll miss my shows if the strike runs long, my sympathy is, unsurprisingly, with the writers. Kfmonkey (screenwriter John Rogers) makes a good case that fairness is on their side too.

Shameless self-promotion

November 1st, 2007, 10:03 am by fsherman

My short story “Learning Curve” is up on byzarium.com starting today. Feel free to check it out.

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